![]() ![]() ![]() At one point the guy talks about sobbing through the bars of the jail and I felt absolutely nothing. Normally when a story features a husband and wife and something happens to one of them I'm a ball of emotions, but this couple's relationship felt flat and mechanical. I realize this is a short story and it continues on, but if you're going to sell me a book it needs to feel whole. And the more I found out about the world, such as the technology or what happened in the past, the more questions I had that were never answered. I didn't think the "big reveal" was all that exciting or as terrifying as I'm sure it was meant to be either. ![]() Basically what my two stars boils down to is this: I had too many questions by the end and I didn't feel attached to any of the characters. ![]()
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